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Last week I sent my radio advert to Martin, Emma and Harvey for feedback. They liked it overall but gave me a list of things to change. One major thing is they want less information, because I was talking to fast to pack all of the script into 30 seconds. Because of this I need to rewrite the script cutting info that I don't feel necessary out. The other issue was brought up by Harvey, who has concerns about copyright issues with the Apple stock music I used, so I'm going to have to make a track to fit the same theme as the old one, but using my own work.